there's something about "All designed to breach your firewall" that bugs me
That verse is the only place where I really have phrases crossing lines, which doesn't happen in the original, IIRC. I might yet change it for that reason, but for now I'm decently content with it -- it's a tad blank-versish, but I like the flow.
Anyway, it's a well done piece, deserving of being shared with a larger audience.
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Date: 2006-12-23 09:35 pm (UTC)That verse is the only place where I really have phrases crossing lines, which doesn't happen in the original, IIRC. I might yet change it for that reason, but for now I'm decently content with it -- it's a tad blank-versish, but I like the flow.
Anyway, it's a well done piece, deserving of being shared with a larger audience.
Thanks...